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One Piece: Neptune Pirate's Legacy [REWRITE]

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Soft gusts from off the sea blew through the hair of a cloaked young lady, but she hardly seemed to notice. She continued along the dock at a medium pace, her boots making no sound when she stepped. Finally she stopped at the door of a run-down pub and pushed it open, illuminating the shameful scene inside. Nothing but cutthroats and violent brigands from wall to wall, a couple of which were holding two tied up whimpering busboys at gunpoint. The girl acknowledged none of them, but strode nonchalantly to a nearby stool and helped herself to some onigiri and ginger pickles which happened to be on the counter.


"So you're hungry, are you?" one of the pirates dared to address her, "Well then, PREPARE TO TASTE MY WRATH!!!"


A dagger embedded itself a hair's breadth away from the girl's elbow, but she didn't look up. Instead she dabbed at her mouth with a kerchief and placed a few Berries on the counter to pay for what she had consumed before rising to her feet and heading for the door. Just when she was within reach of the handle she suddenly spoke up for the first time,


"Put your skill where your mouth is, bastard"


In a split second she had drawn her sword and turned to face the demonic mass, which just as quickly advanced on her with their cutlasses drawn and a bloody haze blurring their vision. It mattered not that they had her surrounded; this girl was unlike anything they had ever faced before. She was alone but fought as though she were a whole army, prompting numerous shouts of "WHO THE HELL IS THIS CRAZY BITCH?!?!?!?!?" Her sword sent pistols flying and even the most delusional scallawags pleaded for mercy before her. By the time she had finally freed the two boys, there was not a pirate present that was not bleeding profusely from some part of their body.


"Infinite thanks to you," one of the boys said clutching her hand and pressing it to his forehead, "if there is anything we could do for..."


"Don't worry, my friend. Freedom is priceless"


Stepping back out into the sunlight she beheld a magnificent ship with an ovine figurehead docked in front of the pub; the Going Merry. The girl tensed herself up and leapt onto the main deck where the greatest pirates to ever take to the seas, the Straw Hat Pirates, stood waiting and bowed their heads respectfully to this great fighter. Their captain stepped forth, removing his beloved hat as he did so.


"It is the greatest honor to have you in my nakama," he whispered in a tone only she could pick up.


"No, I'm the one who is honored by all of you."


A canon shot disrupted the moment and they all turned to see a large ship flying Marine colors approaching quickly. Never a dull moment on the Merry; only one law when you live on the sea, which is...



"MORIKO! STOP LAZYING AROUND! It’s full of pirates out here, and they all want to get drunk to death! COME OUT!"

The lump on the cot stirred into life revealing itself to be a 17 year old girl with brown hair, blue eyes, and a slightly chubby body. She sat up on the cot, rubbing sleep out of her eyes.

“Good morning to you too Koro-san”, she mumbled as she grabbed a cloth nearby and went to wash her face.

After a few minutes she had washed up, brushed her hair, and gotten dressed in her standard white button shirt, black jeans, grey knee boots, and light blue apron. She checked herself in the cracked piece of looking-glass that hung on the basement wall and sighed inwardly to herself. She hated the backbreaking work she was forced to do at the tavern, but at the same time she couldn’t bring herself to leave, wanting to hear more stories of the exploits of pirates each day. Koro had begun ranting and raving again, so she quickly headed upstairs to begin what she was sure would be another grueling day.



Tegowai had just finished his morning training on the Missy Delight, and had decided to check in on Whitmore. Walking across the deck he knocked at the door of the captain’s quarters. The snap of a whip was heard within and a second later the door swung open, revealing Whitmore sitting at his desk, holding his whip with the other end wrapped around the doorknob.


"Sharp as ever captain Whit" Tegowai remarked as he walked in
 

Whitmore sighed, "How many times do I have to tell you I'm not a captain anymore?"


"And how many times do I have to remind you that I don't give a damn" Tegowai answered. Whit laughed


“Come on in and have a break from your training boy.”


“Thank you, I really needed it,” he said as he sat down "you got the liquor?"


“Be right back” Whit said


Tegowai looked at the wall as he waited, sighing as Whit came back with some gin.


Whit shook his head, “It’s Frederick, isn’t it?”


“Can you read minds too now?” He asked looking at the ceiling.


“Look Tegowai, I know what happened hurt you deeply, but now we need to focus on finding the Neptune Pirate. The only one who can stop Scully.”


“I know it better than you old man, that's why I have been training so hard lately, I want to be it.”


“I can't tell right now, but I have a good feeling about this next island. I know we'll discover the Neptune Pirate there.”


“I have a good feeling about it too...” he said, unbeknownst to Whitmore however he was referring to himself.


It has to be me, the Neptune pirate, I must be the one to defeat Scully to avenge the death of my father.
OP: NPL [REWRITE] Chapter 1
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Yes, I have realized how flawed the original NPL was, so I've decided to redo it with a few changes. To start with Whitebeard and Shanks will be absent from the story, Nissa will be a little less of a wimp, and hopefully overall the story will not seem all-that implausible to take place in the actual OP universe. I have been RPing chapters with :iconjuimythecybershark: in the hopes that they will help me get the story on a better track. Be sure to check out his work, partial credit for this chapter goes to him.


Prologue: fav.me/d3eme45

First chapter: This is it

Next chapter: fav.me/d4272lo


IMPORTANT INFO:

An AU fanfiction taking place between the Davy Back Arc and Water 7.



At last, you will all get to experience my story in it's entirety!


As always, please read and review or else I won't know how to get better!



ONE
PIECE
IS
NOT
MINE!!!!!!!!
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Just finished this baby, like it? The random dots you see in the pattern couldn't be avoided, I had to put them in so the pattern would work. Also sorry if the photo quality isn't all that great, the only camera I have is on my phone.


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Nominates by :iconyellowpikmin88:

OC: Moriko Nissa, my One Piece OC


1.- Hi! What's your real name and nickname?
Moriko Nissa, my epithet is Neptune Pirate. 

2.- Interesting... What's your current age?
19

3.- What's your favorite food?
Sushi, sushi, and more sushi! Oh, and sweets! Loads of sweets!

4.- And your favorite drink?
Strawberry milk ^_^

5.- Confession time! Who's your crush/lover?
Well... uuuuhhhh... Monkey D. Luffy

6.- Have you kissed yet?
:iconshyblushplz: N-no

7.- Classic question! What's your favorite color?
Aqua blue, very calming

8.- Who's your favorite author?
Suzanne Collins. Katniss Everdeen kicks ass!

9.- What's your biggest fear?
Pudgy, my pet pig, getting eaten by someone or something. He's the first pet I ever had and I'm responsible for him, I couldn't bear it if something happened to him!

10.- Any siblings?
No biological siblings, but Ussopp, Zoro, Franky, Nami, and Chopper are the best pseudo-siblings anyone could have!
 

11.- Who's your hero?
 Well there are lots of people I look up to, but the biggest ones would have to be Gibson Whitmore (the man who gave me the Neptune Sword) and Luffy. Whitmore because he believed in me and encouraged me to be my best, and Luffy because well just look at him! So what if he's a gluttonous scatterbrained numbskull most of the time, he's one of the bravest, kindest, most self-sacrificing people I've ever met. And that's why I love him :heart:

12.- Okay, who's your worst enemy?
 It's a rarity that I end up hating someone I meet, but for the sake of the question I'm going to say the Celestial Dragons. I mean, those guys are straight-up assholes! They do whatever the hell they want to whoever the hell they want just because they think they're descended from gods or something. I'm sorry, but THAT'S BULL****!

13.- What would you do if your hero and your enemy get together?
I would help my hero of course, though only if they really needed it. I wouldn't want to get in the way. 

14.- What would you do if you met your creator?
 Maybe meet for some coffee, have a relaxing conversation, and perhaps catch a movie. 

15.- What do you wanna be when you grow up?
Well I'm already a pirate, I guess my career plans have pretty much been decided with that. 

16.- What's your worst nightmare?
I have a couple: one is Luffy or someone else eating Pudgy, the other is... well... getting rejected by Luffy in favor of Hancock

17.- What would you do if your dream come true?
You mean if I finally told Luffy how I feel about him? Well... that entirely depends on what he would do. 

18.- Where's your favorite place to relax?
Either the tree swing or the aquarium bar. 

19.- What do you spend most of your time doing?
Hanging out with my nakama, playing with Pudgy, training my sword skills with Zoro, and writing in my journal


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TheiCarlyAngel Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Student Artist
Thank you so much for the watch! :D
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Twas no trouble :)
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Also thanks for the favorite! :D
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Hi
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Hello.

I talked to Fangheart for you, she said she'll see what she can do.
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Thank u
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SweetStar17 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much for all your help!

Hopefully with everything you told me, I'll now be able to add backgrounds to my drawings! ^__^
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I'd love to see them :)
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I'll try to work on one ASAP, and perhaps one of One Piece as well. ^__^
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